Yeah. It starts with “I’m just so angry.” and 3 paragraphs in, I still don’t know what about and why I should care. If you have a point, make it first, then demonstrate. There is no shortage of stupid points made by angry people, if I have to read through 5 pages each time to know if it is about something that makes sense or if it is about the price of eggs in the hollow earth is not workable.
Yeah. It starts with “I’m just so angry.” and 3 paragraphs in, I still don’t know what about and why I should care. If you have a point, make it first, then demonstrate. There is no shortage of stupid points made by angry people, if I have to read through 5 pages each time to know if it is about something that makes sense or if it is about the price of eggs in the hollow earth is not workable.